Dr. Jamie Bondage

Adrian sprang around the corner. His sword came to rest against the man's throat. "Let her go." he growled. The man spun around, shocked and surprised, but Adrian already had ...

Adrian looked at her. He didn't want to leave her, but he nodded. He headed towards her house, but as soon as he was out of their sight, he hid ...

Adrian let her lead him out onto the street. She lead him into deep ally ways he had never been to before. It's like he was seeing for the first ...

Alexandria: She did not feel like sleeping. She just stood, shaking and trembling. Her body felt cold and lifeless. She did not know what was wrong with her. She looked ...

Adrian sighed. "Please? I don't want to see you walk out of my door, knowing that I will never see you again." He held her close. "Please?" He begged. He ...

Adrian nodded. "Then I will come with you." He said simply. He saw a look of shock come over her face. He pulled her towards him gently, kissing her forehead. ...

Adrian: He helped pull up the man onto the plane, glaring at Akeno. He was still mad, but didn't know what he could do about it. He watched as they ...

(OKay) Adrian: He nodded. Senses were on full alert. He did not like his sister being so close to the action. It worried him immensely. He sighed and kept his ...

Adrian: He growled. He wanted to protest, but he had no choice. He was drug to the corner to wait. He glared at Areno. Alexandria: She sighed. She walked towards ...

Name: Adam Asher Order Name: A code name used by the Order in the interest of protecting their identities. Age: 18 Gender: Male Appearance: He has fiery red hair, and ...

I love the message to this. It is really beautiful! My own problem is with the first stanza. It doesn't flow very well. Maybe rework words? I'm not sure. I'm ...

Wow, this was good! I loved the imagery. It was so good! I loved it. I didn't see anything, so keep up the good work. Jamie (Sorry I couldn't be ...

I only saw one thing: "I watch as the drama die as quickly as you did" It should be "dies" Besides that, this is a really good, powerful poem. I ...

Adrian looked deeply into her eyes. He wanted to beg her to stay, but he would not force her. He sighed. "Then I guess this is goodbye." He pulled her ...

Adrian smiled. She seemed more bubbly than he remembered. "Because, you are just a person of misfortune and circumstance. Besides, I...Something about you captivates me. I don't know why, but ...